#WIPITUP Wednesday – A Little Femdom #BDSM #Unorthodox Chemistry

wipitup.jpgHello to all writers and fans who follow these little weekly snippets. I’m currently past 75k of my novel and while I’m far from being the point of “almost there” I’m making daily progress and slowly getting to The End. Today I’m sharing a little of my femdom subplot. I’m not sure if I’ll keep it in the final drafts the trilogy but I’ll decide that once the manuscripts are finished. Meanwhile, enjoy it.

Unorthodox Chemistry is Book 2 of The Unorthodox Trilogy, a sequel to Unorthodox Therapy. Unless life gets in the way I should finish it by the end of October and it should go live by February 18th 2018. The cover is temporary.

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ALLIE

He stood up, placed his palms on the table and inclined his head, meeting my gaze with a fortified determination.

I’m forty-two years old and trust me, I’ve been through more than you can even begin to imagine. I was married, I divorced and I’ve been in and out of more relationships than I can count. I might be naive about that fucked up world you all made for yourself but innocent? Whatever innocence I had I lost it a long time ago.”

He sat back with the same angry, defiant expression but immediately lowered his eyes to the table, with clasped hands and strained shoulders. I stroked the riding crop against my open palm and spoke in a calm, firm voice, with commanding notes that made him look up without me even having to command him.

It’d be alarming if someone your age didn’t have any life experience. If you were just some blank space guy you wouldn’t intrigue me so much?”

Intrigue you?” Nate laughed dryly.

Yes.” I got up from my chair again and walked to him. The riding crop caressed his face. Nate trembled but didn’t move away. Was he the type to bruise? It wouldn’t be long before I found out. “I’m intrigued because you are clearly an intelligent, worldly man and as you said you have experience. You might not be the virginal, blushing type but you are naive when it comes to your own desires. Nate, I don’t think you have a clue what Lina truly needs either.”

There was an intense struggle in his eyes. I could see the waves of emotion storming inside his orbs when my lips nearly found his again. His breath caressed my face and for a moment the temptation to taste his lips was too strong.

You think it’s some tricks you have to learn and that would be all. Like some cheap circus performance.”

That’s not how I’d put it… I’d be careful and I’ll learn fast.”

No.” I shook my head and ran the leather over his face. “If I trained you as a Dom you’d probably get very good using every item in my playroom. You’d get so good with a crop in hand you could even fool Lina. There is no point if your heart truly isn’t in the power exchange.”

He looked pained as I said that. All the insecurity he’s been suppressing came up to the surface. A pang of sympathy ran through me but it was no time to be hesitant.

This is not a skill you learn so you’d be better at pleasing your partner. I told you, I’ve experienced the two sides of the coin. It never occurred to me to simply play a part or assume a role just to please a partner whether I liked it or not. That’s how tragedies start.”

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I’m not 100% happy with the chapter but it will be smoking hot once it’s polished (modesty personified)/ Now go to WIP IT UP Headquarters for some more tasty pieces of writing.

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